Score: 8

"Good humor"

submission: Why Robots? ep. 1

date: August 1, 2007

Well, let's start with the graphics.
I think you could at least add some more details to the robot, especially
since it is the main character.
Although the graphics of the water, the girl, the crab and that Godzilla were
really nice.
The style is kind of almost unique, haven't seen it often and you can try
to improve your own style a bit.
The humor was, original and i found it actually funny humor, not too rude,
not too soft, good humor. :)
Maybe, like the others said you could add lip syncing to the movie, to make
it more realistic.
And you could have added soft beach music on a low volume, the music for the
scene where the robot got angry at the girl had perfect music, and the music
for the scenes between the beach scenes fitted quite well too.
You have potential, but you need only practice and we will see your movies
getting better automatically, one big advice, have fun in making movies and
theres nothing to worry about!
Thanks for using my music by the way. :D

Keep it up, and especially the humor.
4/5

Score: 5

"Needs some work."

submission: B-dancing Comp Ad

date: May 5, 2007

Since you ask for critique i will review this one.
I will start with the negative things, well, there wasn't that much animation isn't it?
And the scene where one of those guys say, one is way too short.
You could better let that thing show up a bit longer, and since this was an advertisement for a breakdance competition..
Wheres the breakdance animation?

Positive things are that the music is good for an advertisement and that the text had nice effects.
I think you are good in making advertisement but if you can't make animations about the general thing the advertisement is a bit they get a bit too boring.

What if every advertisement looked like this? That would be quiet boring.

And next time post it at another site, Flash advertisements in the flash portal aren't allowed at Newgrounds.

Keep it up.

Score: 9

"Nice game"

submission: Pico & the Mental Menace

date: May 3, 2007

Wow man, thank you so much for using one of my songs into your Flash.
Anyway, i will give the review now.
Well, your game has really good graphics, i like that.
Style? You gave it a bit your own style, the characters and backgrounds were drawn at a nice way and i haven't seen the style that much before.
Sound, well i liked the music you used for the scenes and they all did fit the scene too.
Violence? Hmm, people died at the beginning of the game and there were robots you had to defeat.
So, there was some violence in it.
Interactivity? It is a game, and good gameplay too.
A good platformer like a lot of games.
Humor, hmm haven't really seen some in it.
Ok, good game and i like it!
Keep it up!

Score: 7

"Nice remix"

submission: IRVGM - MMBN4 Boss Battle!

date: July 15, 2007

I like this song the most of your tracks.
And the melody's are done really good, and it has that Videogame feeling in it.
I like the star sounds in it again, good work on this and i liked this track.

4/5

- Astrono

Score: 6

"Bass didn't fit"

submission: IRVGM - Mario Drum and Bass!!!

date: July 15, 2007

I liked this song more but the noises were a bit annoying and the bass doesn't fit the melody's.
I liked how you remade the melody's and i liked the nice star sounds :)

- Astrono

Score: 6

"Good melody's"

submission: IRVGM - TOP GEAR Track 1

date: July 15, 2007

The intro starts out really interesting, and the hardcore beat gives an interesting effect to the song.
There are nice melody's in this song but it annoys me a bit, i think because of the speed of the song although the melody's are really good.

- Astrono Take a listen to my audio if you'd like :)