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.... Another world, a world full of pain and blood.. Opposite... Existing, there where our souls bring us.. But both need eachother in high and low ways
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I can see why you choosed the title.
This song is really bright and cute in some way, like you have a beautiful romantic dream, or a baby dreaming. :)
I like all those tingle sounds you used, a really interesting song with enough variety in melody's and good instrument choice.
Only thing is that for me, some of your rhythms were a little bit out of balance, but then you fixed that again after a few seconds.
Good song.
Author's Response:
thanx a lot, but man, i'm gonna hafta name my next song aaaaa or something so this doesn't get all the reviews!
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The one hat at the beginning was interesting, i liked the machine sounds.
This starts out as a song which will get creepier.
The drumbeat is good, but i think this song is a bit repetitive.
After the first machine sounds the low synths come in.
I can see the title of this song and when the low synths come in you start with another drumloop.
This song was ok, but it needs some work on the repetitive parts though.
Try to add some more variety to your next songs.
Author's Response:
I always fail at Variety.
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Look, now it gets better!
The voice at the intro was the best thing for this, i guess you tried to make a song for an airplane because if this was a, look at the sky song the voice wouldn't really fit it.
I really like the synths you put in this, and the voice is pretty good too.
The drumloop is good too and fits this song, i like the bleep sounds.
Good work, but i say again, try to work on the rhythms.
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I've been waiting for a review on this song.
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"Good melody's, other things need a lot of work"
This gets a bit boring, since you repeat the same melody too much.
Although it's a loop you can at least try to use two or three different melody's which sound good with eachother, and i hear pre-sets in this one again.
Good thing is the melody again, i really like the melody's you mixed through eachother in this one, but still, instruments.
Drums are good.
Author's Response:
I thought it sounded amazing at the time, and I was oblivious to the fact its too short. I didn't know I could create my own sounds, and I could use the pattern thing.
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Hmm, i don't really like the fact you used pre-sets for this.
But if this is your first little song i can understand it.
The first thing repeats too much, then the voice comes in.
And then the synth, which plays some melody's in too different rhythms, you have some good melody's in mind but in this song, (i still have to listen to your others) you have too much problems with making the good rhythms.
Needs work, but i heard worse things.
Author's Response:
Remember, I wasn't exactly a pro.
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This song is really creepy and strange but beautiful too.
I really love those robot sounds in this song, and the other mechanic sounds.
With the main instrument, which gives a kind of feeling like you are somewhere else, and the beat adds more strangeness to this song.
A brilliant piece, keep it up and make more like this.
Author's Response:
Thanks - seems that a few peeps are using words like "creepy and strange" I'm glad that you liked this one.
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The intro started really calming.
With a good beat through it, and some nice background sounds, the water sounds were a good thing that you added to this song.
It keeps on like this for a long time, the relaxing and calming part.
And then after a while the pad comes in, which plays some great melody's which i love!
Indeed, it reminds me of space, the mysterious feeling.
As others said, this sounds much better than your other songs.
Try to make more songs with this NASA space expeditions feeling.
Author's Response:
thank you good sir
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I like those metal instruments you use at the intro and the melody's are ok too.
Enough variation in this song, the rhythm isn't bad either and the drums are good too.
Nice little song you have here, i like it :)
If i should say something you have to improve on.. try to make it longer next time is the only thing i can come up with and keep on doing like this.
Author's Response:
thanks for the constructive review!
ill never touch this song again lol its just a melody I liked so I put it on here, check out Gateway!!! its a lot better than this and I made it like yesterday.
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This is a really cool song!
And calming too in some way....
The bells give a kind of mysterious effect to this song and the beat gives a good rhythm and addition to this song.
And the bass gives the dark and creepy mood to this song.
Good work, keep it coming.
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A nice intro you got there and indeed a happy song.
Good melody's you used for this song, the part with the short notes was really interesting.
I liked it and i had to think of a kind of stadium when i heard it, this could be a perfect song to play at party's.
Only thing you could better add next time is a bassline.
Nice work, keep the songs coming.
Author's Response:
what's wrong with the bassline? has it to low high frequ? cuz if you have a sub, you will notice it ^^
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