Score: 6

"Good"

submission: Getting Bored

date: January 6, 2007

Wow, you say this is not your best song but it sounds really good!
The melody is good and it has a good beat.
Keep it up ;)

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: Cage Dome

date: January 6, 2007

The main melody sounds good, the synth has a good melody too.
The beat is really good done, it's good for an agressive theme.
The electric guitars make it more agressive.
Indeed, a good Sonic song.
Keep it up.;)

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: 1992

date: January 6, 2007

Ok, the square tones at the beginning are good.
But they repeat the same tone way too much, but later the song gets better.
The main melody sounds good, but the beat starts too late, you expect it starts earlier but it doesn't.
When the drop sound and the hi-hat sound starts the song gets better.
The electric instruments that comes then make it sounds better.
The song is good, but you have to make the beat starts earlier and add more different melody's and don't let the same melody repeats too much ;)

Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: Jonathan's Song

date: January 6, 2007

Wow, beautiful
I get goose bumps from this song, it's starts like a normal song.
Than you make the melody a bit clearer, and then you add echo's what give it a really nice touch.
This could be used for a romantic movie or maybe for a beach.
Or the sea, this is so good and could be used for so much things!
I really like this song, make more please!:D

Score: 7

"Beats are really good"

submission: ./'Around'\.

date: January 6, 2007

The melody sounded a bit like there is going to happen something, the soft beat fits it really good.
When the real beat comes it sounds more agressive.
Hmm....
You are really good with rhythms and beats!
But try to work on the melody ;)
It repeats the whole time.
Don't worry about that, but you could let more different instruments come in that repeats that beat to make it less boring.
Keep it up, the beats are good, now only the instruments and good melody's ;)

Score: 5

"Better but not that good"

submission: FL experiments 001

date: January 6, 2007

This one is better than your previous ones.
The main melody sounds good like a mysterious house, the beat doesn't really fit it.
You need softer instruments for it.
And maybe you could make the rhythm a bit less random.
You are a beginner in Fruity Loops and probably i could help you if you want.
You just have to PM me.

Score: 10

"Perfect"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Devotion

date: January 5, 2007

The intro sounds good,
the melody gives a kind of agressive beat.
The fwoosh sound at the background gives a good effect.
If it starts with the beat it gets better, the new instrument make it sounds better.
Then the main melody starts again, and the new instrument starts again after a few repeats.
The fade in and fade out effect at the end make it sounds really good.
It should be a really good song for a Flash Game.
Maybe a shooter game.
A really good song, as i see it's used in some submissions.
The same melody repeats to much but it's putted in the song at a way that it still sounds really good.
I don't know what you could improve on but keep making on these kind of tracks ;)

Score: 7

"Ok...."

submission: You're Fired

date: January 5, 2007

It sounded much like a videogame theme.
Maybe good for a nice old videogame titlescreen theme.
The strings make it sounds better, really good melody's.
They sound happy, like theres peace restored in a land.
Only thing i don't get is your title, You're fired.
It sounds too peaceful for a title like that, only thing that had to do with it was the title came in later.
The melody fits the title but the melody's are way to nice to fit it, and the voice at the end said you're fired.
Hmm, this song could be used if someone is astonished because he's fired and there plays a happy song after there repeats the line: You're fired in his head.

Things to improve on?
The melodys, they are good melody's but don't really fit the title.
Anyway it was good song in overall, much luck with your next one. ;)

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: HrrHd - Suspense #1

date: January 5, 2007

The high tones have a normal melody,
the temple bells give it a kind of graveyard theme.
Probably a good theme for when someone is visiting a graveyard and something scary happens.
Try to improve on the length of the song and add more instruments ;)

Score: 7

"Okay"

submission: No mercy [full version]

date: January 5, 2007

I 'am normal not a Heavy Metal listener but you have to try to review alot of different genres.
Hmm, it contains good melody's, good intro.
You used a good guitar for this song.
The drums at the backgrounds fit the song good,
the song gets faster later in the song.
It sounds good but you need to let more instruments come in later.
That's my tip for you, much luck with your next song ;)