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.... Another world, a world full of pain and blood.. Opposite... Existing, there where our souls bring us.. But both need eachother in high and low ways
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Negative things
Ehm, i listened to it and i think that you repeat the same melody too much.
The synth that came later, made it a bit better but it keeps playing the same melody.
Adding some other melodys would improve it alot.
Positive things
Nice beat, and the kind of instruments you used were nice.
The bang sound at the end was nice.
Author's Response:
Thx man i need a bit a negative shit to and this is jsut the demo man ... my 11th hip-hop and i jsut got full verson of fl so ill be mixin mad aha.
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Exactly what a boss music has to sound like, nice high tones at some parts and low strong tones.
And the violins let it listen like there is some might in it.
It's really good, only thing you have to improve is the length, when it got nice it ended.
Author's Response:
the original boss battle #1 song was about this long, i didn't want to add any new or extra notes, i just wanted to replace them with orchestral instruments then record each instrument i played and them fuse the notes together, this song is suppossed to loop but it will not! cause i have the fading habit >_<. thanks for your review sir.
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I love your music, it's like one of that good old medieval like videogames.
I especially love the flute, it gives a nice effect.
You have a good taste of instruments, it sounds really great!
And original too, keep up composing music like this!
I 'm looking forward to your next work ;)
Author's Response:
i like rpg making systems, it's one of the best entertainment in iran, there's a reason why i wanted to learn english desperatly, and yes my next upcoming work will mostly be a fusion collab with aspachi. i learn and get my talent by other music and such.
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The beat at the beginning sounds good, the bass makes it sounds even better.
The next instrument has a nice melody, the echo gives it a nice effect too.
I really like the fade in and fade out effects.
It sounds good, but i think the same melody repeats too much. The music has good instruments.
And the voices gave it a nice touch.
Keep making music like this, but add some more melodys.;)
Author's Response:
Thanx dude,but this was a cover
ANd as the original also only has these melodies,i didnt have much choice,but i could have ofcourse created some others,but for this track it seemed t0 me to be fine
thanx for the review :)
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You are right that it sounds freaky,
if the beat comes it begins to sound good.
The part that begins after the beat is too long i think.
It sounds good, but it could use some improvements like more dark instruments ;)
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I Make relaxing songs myself too sometimes,
and the melody sounded good but you used way too less instruments.
I think you could better add more instruments next time, but keep going on.
If you continue with making music, you are going to be great. ;)
Please, listen to mine Audio Portal, there are a few good examples of relaxing music into it too :P
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Very good done, it sounds dark but there are a few false notes in it.
If you fix that your song sounds perfect! ;)
Author's Response:
Thankx man, always up for a tip, but I'm not exactly which instruments are hittin the false notes. Is it the last note on the second part of the piano riff.
Well good luck with ya music
*PEACE*
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For a beat it sounded good, only the claps didn't.
You paused between the first and second clap, and that makes it a bit out of rythm.
Author's Response:
:(
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Hehe, the melody sounds funny but i advice you to make it longer
But i think you could become very good if you keep making music! ;)
Author's Response:
no
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