Score: 8

"Good humor"

submission: Why Robots? ep. 1

date: August 1, 2007

Well, let's start with the graphics.
I think you could at least add some more details to the robot, especially
since it is the main character.
Although the graphics of the water, the girl, the crab and that Godzilla were
really nice.
The style is kind of almost unique, haven't seen it often and you can try
to improve your own style a bit.
The humor was, original and i found it actually funny humor, not too rude,
not too soft, good humor. :)
Maybe, like the others said you could add lip syncing to the movie, to make
it more realistic.
And you could have added soft beach music on a low volume, the music for the
scene where the robot got angry at the girl had perfect music, and the music
for the scenes between the beach scenes fitted quite well too.
You have potential, but you need only practice and we will see your movies
getting better automatically, one big advice, have fun in making movies and
theres nothing to worry about!
Thanks for using my music by the way. :D

Keep it up, and especially the humor.
4/5

Score: 5

"Needs some work."

submission: B-dancing Comp Ad

date: May 5, 2007

Since you ask for critique i will review this one.
I will start with the negative things, well, there wasn't that much animation isn't it?
And the scene where one of those guys say, one is way too short.
You could better let that thing show up a bit longer, and since this was an advertisement for a breakdance competition..
Wheres the breakdance animation?

Positive things are that the music is good for an advertisement and that the text had nice effects.
I think you are good in making advertisement but if you can't make animations about the general thing the advertisement is a bit they get a bit too boring.

What if every advertisement looked like this? That would be quiet boring.

And next time post it at another site, Flash advertisements in the flash portal aren't allowed at Newgrounds.

Keep it up.

Score: 9

"Nice game"

submission: Pico & the Mental Menace

date: May 3, 2007

Wow man, thank you so much for using one of my songs into your Flash.
Anyway, i will give the review now.
Well, your game has really good graphics, i like that.
Style? You gave it a bit your own style, the characters and backgrounds were drawn at a nice way and i haven't seen the style that much before.
Sound, well i liked the music you used for the scenes and they all did fit the scene too.
Violence? Hmm, people died at the beginning of the game and there were robots you had to defeat.
So, there was some violence in it.
Interactivity? It is a game, and good gameplay too.
A good platformer like a lot of games.
Humor, hmm haven't really seen some in it.
Ok, good game and i like it!
Keep it up!

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: Traveling VegMan

date: February 4, 2007

It's a really good game if you want to learn different kind of languages, and i have found a kind of bug.
If you do Dutch to Dutch, French to French etc. it doesn't give a word to translate and then you have to guess a word you maybe don't know.
But it's handy if one of that languages is your first language and you want to guess a word in your own language :P
Anyway, a good medium game but as others said not really a game for Newgrounds.
Nice work.

Score: 10

"Perfect"

submission: Plankton Life 2

date: January 1, 2007

Perfect game,
super graphics!
I really love them, the style is good too.
The music was one of the best things, ParagonX9's music is always good.
And the sound that you heard when you got a bubble added a great effect.
Theres no violence in it
The interactivity is super, and a great thing that you could choose between using your mouse or your keys.
There wasn't really humor, but it didn't needed it.
My score was 620230 at this wonderful game.
Keep making this kind of cute and super games! ;)

Score: 7

"Hilarious"

submission: B

date: December 24, 2006

I don't know why but that B makes me laugh
Does it mean Brilliant?

Score: 9

"Really cool!"

submission: Future

date: December 23, 2006

I 'm addicted to the music of it!
I Give a 10 for style because i haven't seen a movie like this before.
Good combination of anime and 3D style, even if you haven't used a 3D program.
Good humor, in the signs. :P
We are looking forward to your next work!

Score: 9

"Pirate Clock, yay"

submission: Piratey

date: December 21, 2006

Ahh, now Pirate Clock have to wait until next year to celebrate his birthday. XD
The graphics were perfect, i liked the song, there wasn't any real violence in it.
Play button.
And just made in 4 days?
Wow, you have to be really good to could do this in 4 days.

Score: 6

"I wish you a merry christmas"

submission: Merry Christmas Card

date: December 21, 2006

Nicely done, but there could be some things fixed and you could let the hand draw lots of more things in the christmas tree.
Anyway, good work.
I wish you a merry christmas too.

Score: 6

"Bravo"

submission: computer people

date: December 21, 2006

I think i get your point, and it's true that some people give computers the faults for things they did wrong at their computer while the computer works hard.
Really good idea, to make a music video about it. ;)
I love your song, and the isometric way you made everything.
Good work!