Score: 7

"Jingle Bells"

submission: Snow Line

date: December 21, 2006

I really like it!
It's like Kirby Power Paintbursh but in a christmas suit with santa as main character.
Good Job!

Score: 7

"Sad, but at a good way"

submission: 666BloodyFuck

date: December 21, 2006

Actually this flash is good.
The music fits the flash, it gives you a sad feeling.
And i think that's what you wanted to do.
The character was special and especially the face is good done.
With the sharp teeths she has.
The background was like a base, a secret base i think.
I Like this loop, it gives you a sad feeling if you look and listen to it for a few minutes.
This isn't my favorite flash but it isn't bad too.
Good work, i hope to see more from you, i think if you make a longer flash more people should like it and you could let see what you really could do with flash.
Keep up the good work.

Score: 7

"Good but"

submission: ButtplugClock

date: December 17, 2006

The graphics and style were really good done, i like it how you drawed it.
It was random, but you could make it longer and let the crying clock explained why he cryed.
And put some more jokes in it.

Score: 9

"Wonderful!"

submission: F2Jam TheMusicGame - Beta

date: December 3, 2006

How did this got Underdog of the week!?
It is a brilliant game!
I Like it and the music is good.
Graphics are awesome.
An unique style.
There isn't violence, interactivity is super.
And overall it is a great game.
I Can't wait for your full version! :D

Score: 8

"Well done"

submission: Rockman Neo

date: November 24, 2006

You are really good at drawing the megaman characters, and the animation was also very good done.
The sound was perfect, i loved the music you have used for it.
There was much violence in it, but you can expect that with a megaman movie.
There wasn't any humor, the movie was more meant to be cool with alot of action.
Good work.

Score: 8

"Hilarious"

submission: ANIMATION INVASION

date: November 24, 2006

Really good work, your acting was hilarious and the emotions on your face were good.
Only things is i don't know how the guy could jump out of the computer, but that doesn't matter now.
I saw you are really good at graphics, how fast you have draw that guy.
Only you could better add more shading, as others here said.
Because it doesn't really looks like the guys are in the real world now.
Maybe you must work a bit more on your sound.
As others said, you could better add sound effects.
That can make your movie way more funny if you use the right sounds.
There wasn't real violence, only when you was trying to keep away some guys by biting on them.
But there wasn't a blood effect with it.
The humor....
You have made this a really hilarious movie!
Try to make it more funny the next time, that can be possible by let some guys doing fun things.
Only thing is you must work more on your story line next time, why did the guys want you to go into the computer?
Because they were in the computer also, or something?
But this was a really good job!
Hope to see more from you.
(Are you dutch? Because the name looks like a dutch name :P)

Score: 8

"Better than your first one!"

submission: Hitokiri act 2

date: November 18, 2006

Hmm, it is better than your previous one.
The Graphics were improved, hope that they also are improved in your next episodes.
Hmm, the sound is still not the best.
You have used more instruments in this one, but you don't use much different melodys.
I Think you should make more dark melodys, because this is a dark story also.
I Use the same music program as you, but you can get much more out the program if you try harder.
If you use alot of darker instruments, low tones and less claps and snares it should be much better.
Just try it, and you will see it shall be much better. :)
But, the music in this episode is much better than in your first episode.
There was more violence in this episode than in the first one, but why there aren't any teachers coming to Yoshua because he smash some school kids?
There was also in this episode only a play button.
There was a little bit humor, with the school part when Amsterdam was written on the blackboard.
I see you are making improvements!
Keep up the good work. ;)

Score: 7

"Really good work! Especially for a dutch person!"

submission: hitokiri act 1: becoming

date: November 18, 2006

I 'am dutch too, very nice to see another dutch person on Newgrounds that can make a good movie.
The black and white graphics gave it a nice touch.
I think you could work better on your sound, the sound in the training part was a bit repetitive.
You used too much rhythms i think, if you use more normal instruments like guitars, piano's and maybe some electronical instruments it should be much better.
You could make the music for the training part also much better, if you use fast tones and a bit more electronic guitars.
But don't use too much claps, drums and snares.
There was much violence, with the father that was shot.
The figure that shot his father is interesting,
you could do alot with that character.
You have made only a play button like most people.
There wasn't humor in your movie, but your movie is more about the action.
Keep making this movies and it will become much better everytime.
I can advice you to make for example, the guy that shot his father have assistents that the main character have to defeat.
At that way you could make a complexer story line and you could put more action, and better weapons in it.
Hope you find this review helpful!
I 'am looking forward to your next episodes. ;)

Score: 6

"Black and white"

submission: Classic Short

date: November 10, 2006

Hmm, a black and white movie.
Interesting, and it have also a very good story line.
Your graphics were good.
It was a black and white movie, and it had also not much sound.
But you said that it was a silent short so that´s ok.
Only the ending had sound, with the knife, and the short music.
There was alot of violence at the ending that we not really could see, only thing we heard was a guy with a knife that attacked the poor guy.
But maybe you can explain why the bad guy used a knife against him, did he hated him or did he wanted to rob his money?
His personality was a bit too positive, he was positive about how the city looked like while it was almost destroyed.
Interactivity was only play button.

Score: 7

"Good, and a nice dream"

submission: -Dreamer-

date: November 10, 2006

I Must give you a compliment for the background.
They looked very nice, and the shadows are also good done for the backgrounds.
The characters looked good, but not perfect.
The angel and the two men that were working looked more like stickfigures. Maybe you can let them more look like the dreamer next time.
Hmm, this was again a new kind of style i saw.
The dreamer looked unique in your own drawing style.
You have only used music for your movie, and it was good music you used that gave a peaceful effect to the movie.
There was no violence.
You have only made a preloader so i can´t give you much for interactivity.
Can´t also give you much points for humor.
I think you can better try to improve your animations skills.
When the angel and the dreamer moved they changed in a kind of white force effect and were later at the place where they wanted to be.
If this was to give them speed then you have done it good, but you could give it force lines too.
Else you can better draw them like they are running then next time.