Score: 8

"Good humor"

submission: Why Robots? ep. 1

date: August 1, 2007

Well, let's start with the graphics.
I think you could at least add some more details to the robot, especially
since it is the main character.
Although the graphics of the water, the girl, the crab and that Godzilla were
really nice.
The style is kind of almost unique, haven't seen it often and you can try
to improve your own style a bit.
The humor was, original and i found it actually funny humor, not too rude,
not too soft, good humor. :)
Maybe, like the others said you could add lip syncing to the movie, to make
it more realistic.
And you could have added soft beach music on a low volume, the music for the
scene where the robot got angry at the girl had perfect music, and the music
for the scenes between the beach scenes fitted quite well too.
You have potential, but you need only practice and we will see your movies
getting better automatically, one big advice, have fun in making movies and
theres nothing to worry about!
Thanks for using my music by the way. :D

Keep it up, and especially the humor.
4/5

Score: 5

"Needs some work."

submission: B-dancing Comp Ad

date: May 5, 2007

Since you ask for critique i will review this one.
I will start with the negative things, well, there wasn't that much animation isn't it?
And the scene where one of those guys say, one is way too short.
You could better let that thing show up a bit longer, and since this was an advertisement for a breakdance competition..
Wheres the breakdance animation?

Positive things are that the music is good for an advertisement and that the text had nice effects.
I think you are good in making advertisement but if you can't make animations about the general thing the advertisement is a bit they get a bit too boring.

What if every advertisement looked like this? That would be quiet boring.

And next time post it at another site, Flash advertisements in the flash portal aren't allowed at Newgrounds.

Keep it up.

Score: 7

"Sad, but at a good way"

submission: 666BloodyFuck

date: December 21, 2006

Actually this flash is good.
The music fits the flash, it gives you a sad feeling.
And i think that's what you wanted to do.
The character was special and especially the face is good done.
With the sharp teeths she has.
The background was like a base, a secret base i think.
I Like this loop, it gives you a sad feeling if you look and listen to it for a few minutes.
This isn't my favorite flash but it isn't bad too.
Good work, i hope to see more from you, i think if you make a longer flash more people should like it and you could let see what you really could do with flash.
Keep up the good work.

Score: 8

"I Like Pie"

submission: Pokémon, the climax

date: October 16, 2006

Very well done!
You have made it a way that this is also funny for Pokemon fans.
Your graphics were good and the Pikachu from Ash was cute!
The voice-acting was also done well and funny.
There was no real violence with blood.
Interactivity was the play button and the game were you can't go game over.
And the humor was great!
We are not going to fight your Pokemon, we are going to fight YOU!
Very nice done.