Astrono's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hitokiri act 2]

Better than your first one!

Hmm, it is better than your previous one.
The Graphics were improved, hope that they also are improved in your next episodes.
Hmm, the sound is still not the best.
You have used more instruments in this one, but you don't use much different melodys.
I Think you should make more dark melodys, because this is a dark story also.
I Use the same music program as you, but you can get much more out the program if you try harder.
If you use alot of darker instruments, low tones and less claps and snares it should be much better.
Just try it, and you will see it shall be much better. :)
But, the music in this episode is much better than in your first episode.
There was more violence in this episode than in the first one, but why there aren't any teachers coming to Yoshua because he smash some school kids?
There was also in this episode only a play button.
There was a little bit humor, with the school part when Amsterdam was written on the blackboard.
I see you are making improvements!
Keep up the good work. ;)

[hitokiri act 1: becoming]

Really good work! Especially for a dutch person!

I 'am dutch too, very nice to see another dutch person on Newgrounds that can make a good movie.
The black and white graphics gave it a nice touch.
I think you could work better on your sound, the sound in the training part was a bit repetitive.
You used too much rhythms i think, if you use more normal instruments like guitars, piano's and maybe some electronical instruments it should be much better.
You could make the music for the training part also much better, if you use fast tones and a bit more electronic guitars.
But don't use too much claps, drums and snares.
There was much violence, with the father that was shot.
The figure that shot his father is interesting,
you could do alot with that character.
You have made only a play button like most people.
There wasn't humor in your movie, but your movie is more about the action.
Keep making this movies and it will become much better everytime.
I can advice you to make for example, the guy that shot his father have assistents that the main character have to defeat.
At that way you could make a complexer story line and you could put more action, and better weapons in it.
Hope you find this review helpful!
I 'am looking forward to your next episodes. ;)

[Classic Short]

Black and white

Hmm, a black and white movie.
Interesting, and it have also a very good story line.
Your graphics were good.
It was a black and white movie, and it had also not much sound.
But you said that it was a silent short so that´s ok.
Only the ending had sound, with the knife, and the short music.
There was alot of violence at the ending that we not really could see, only thing we heard was a guy with a knife that attacked the poor guy.
But maybe you can explain why the bad guy used a knife against him, did he hated him or did he wanted to rob his money?
His personality was a bit too positive, he was positive about how the city looked like while it was almost destroyed.
Interactivity was only play button.

[-Dreamer-]

Good, and a nice dream

I Must give you a compliment for the background.
They looked very nice, and the shadows are also good done for the backgrounds.
The characters looked good, but not perfect.
The angel and the two men that were working looked more like stickfigures. Maybe you can let them more look like the dreamer next time.
Hmm, this was again a new kind of style i saw.
The dreamer looked unique in your own drawing style.
You have only used music for your movie, and it was good music you used that gave a peaceful effect to the movie.
There was no violence.
You have only made a preloader so i can´t give you much for interactivity.
Can´t also give you much points for humor.
I think you can better try to improve your animations skills.
When the angel and the dreamer moved they changed in a kind of white force effect and were later at the place where they wanted to be.
If this was to give them speed then you have done it good, but you could give it force lines too.
Else you can better draw them like they are running then next time.

[arfenhouse teh movie too]

Very good done

I Like Arfenhouse 6 and Arfenhouse 2.
Before you made Arfenhouse 6, Arfenhouse 2 was one of my favourite movies.
I Like the DDR and the store part of this movie.
Your graphics are as always unique and that also count for this movie.
The style is exactly what you expect of Arfenhouse.
You must have used alot of sound files for this movie.
The violence.... Blowing up stuff, all the blood, knifes, laserguns.
Hmm, interactivity is just the play button.
Humor was the best part, i like all your Arfenhouse movies.

[Arfenhouse Teh Movie 4!!!]

Pacman.....

The ending was the best part of this whole Arfenhouse.
Wonder where you got that song from.
Your graphics are normal in this one but you have improved it in Arfenhouse 6.
The style was unique like in all Arfenhouse movies.
Sound was very good because of that.
Only violence were all that explosions you put in this one.
Interactivity was only the play button....
Humor was super but that counts in every Arfenhouse movie.
Keep up the good work! ;)

[Dad's Home]

It's earlier Mad Dad

Lol, you have did very good with this.
The Music was the best part in this movie and there was much randomness.
There was a bit violence with the laser eyes, hehe.
And the Graphics were also good done.
Keep up the good work!

[Pokémon, the climax]

I Like Pie

Very well done!
You have made it a way that this is also funny for Pokemon fans.
Your graphics were good and the Pikachu from Ash was cute!
The voice-acting was also done well and funny.
There was no real violence with blood.
Interactivity was the play button and the game were you can't go game over.
And the humor was great!
We are not going to fight your Pokemon, we are going to fight YOU!
Very nice done.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Righto, glad you liked it

[Smile!]

Good work

This was dark and creepy but also very amazing.
You have done very good work with this.
The right sound is used with your movie, there was alot with violence with the smiling robots using needles at the poor guy.
The interactivity was just the play button,
and there wasn't any real humor in it.
But in this kind of movies, you don't need any humor.
But it was very special and it let see that robots also can kill people....

[Demolition Squid]

You are in danger! Ooh....

Look out! That house is right next to you!
It's funny only the start with the orphanage was a bit too hard but the other parts were funny.
The Graphics were fantastic done.
Sound was also good done, and the voice was perfect of Demolition Squid.
Only Violence was that he blowed up a house and a bank.
Interactivity was only the play button, and the humor was very good!
Hope to see the movie of Demolition Squid.