Astrono's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Return of Fire]

Good

A great song!
You are so good.

The beats already gave this song a pretty nice RPG battle like effect.
However i don't know the game Lightening Force.

I really like those bells and melody's you used for this song.

Keep going on like this.

Charem responds:

Thanks! I never really thought of it as an RPG battle song, but I agree! =3

[Drowning...]

Wow

I loved the reverse sounds you used.
I always love reversed sounds XD
Anyway, as the other person said this doesn't really sound like drowning indeed.
When you drown, it sounds faster, maybe creepy-er.
People are shocked when they drown, so you could add some shocking effects too if you would like to make a good drowning song.

And maybe some low hits, but played at a low volume so it sounds like death is coming closer but still is far away or like you are leaving earth.
Going to another place.

This sounds more like a dreamworld, i have no idea why but reversed instruments can really give a dream effect to songs.
Anyway, the orchestrals were i great addition to the song!

Keep making these songs! :D

Charem responds:

I agree that you'd be frenzied at first when drowning, but it'd still be pretty quiet, muffled, soundless. Just the sound of the water rushing about you as you flail about. No scream will be heard. I guess that's what I was trying to emulate.

Though the idea of it being a dreamworld is also quite good! =3

[[MS] - Stepping Stoned]

Pretty good!

The foot steps at the intro are a good way to come in the song.
The main melody that comes after it sounds really good, the foot steps that you hear stepping in different rhythms are good.
When the beat comes in, it fits with the rhythm of the foot steps.

The arpeggio has a simple but effective melody that fits the other things the song include.
The bass-like tone that comes before the ending part is a good thing to include too, and a good and nice ending with the glitchy sounds.

I don't know what you can improve because you already added almost everything that's needed in a song, maybe try to add some more variety to the main melody the next time.

Good job! ;)

MackerelSalad responds:

I tried to make this song more of a minimalist when it comes to melody, thanks for your review, man!

[[MS] - Schyrztawek]

Nice song.

I like the electric piano and the voices at the intro, after that a nice melody and beat come in with ice cube sounds.
The song keeps on with the same instruments, but you add some variety in the beats and melody's sometimes.
And at the part before the ending ending you can hear the same ice cube-like sounds at the beginning again.
I like the beat you used at the ending, it fits that part really good.
Good fading out effect at the end.
A good worked out song, keep it up.

MackerelSalad responds:

The icecube like sounds, you are talking about is actually a ride I altered.
Thanks for the review, man!

[[GF]BotenAnna[GF]]

A bit repetitive, but nice melody's

I like the song, has the same melody's like the original song.
Nice instruments, but is too repetitive.
Try to work on that, good luck with your further songs ;)

GroundForce responds:

k i will!!

thx!

[GF]

[(FW) Adventurous Journey]

Heres a review, sir

Wow, sounds really nice!
I like the orchestrals, and it sounds really fantasy when i hear the star sound.
Nice beat, and the guitar is the best part.
I like the synths, you added later after the guitar.
Good work, keep it up

wolf-tech responds:

thanx. i proabally made some mistakes in there. after all i've been working on it from 1 am to 4am.

[Dunes]

Sounds a bit Egyptic to me

I can really hear a Drum 'n' Bass song in this, i like the main melody's you add after the intro.
Hmm, the melody sounds a bit egyptic to me.
The beats give agressivity to the song, but i like the main instrument you added after the intro the most.
Try to make it a bit less repetitive the next time, nice work.

DJ-Izeales responds:

thnx for the review mate, i kno, i need to keep surpising the listener, this is the first time i had a go and breakbeat/drum and bass beat. keep reviews coming

[watching the stars]

Good, but needs some work

The beat at the start, is a bit too loud i think.
I like the twinkle sounds.
But it gets a bit too repetitive.
I like the synth you add after it, and the falling star sound.
The orchestrals are really nice too.
Good song, but work a bit more on the variety in melody's the next time.
Changing some notes, some times can help with that.
Keep it up! ;)

DJ-doomslide responds:

thanks for the comment ill take it into consideration

[The Chukkbar]

Nicely done

Nice drum beat at the intro.
I love the melody's you added, i like the square tones you added later in the song.
A swinging song, the Trance instruments were a good addition to it.
Maybe try to add a bassline the next time.
Keep it up! ;)

Mr-Dark responds:

Thanks for your review!
I'll try to add a better bassline in my next remix (or own song) :)

[->>rpg Tk Battle2<<-]

Nice work

I like the intro, and the electric guitar gives it a more swinging effect.
I like the electric piano, it makes the song better.
Really swinging melody's, a nice rhythm and a nice clapping in the beat.
I don't know what you can improve at it, maybe try to add some more melody's one time but that isn't really needed since this song sounds good already.
Good work, keep it up. ;)

vwvSTATICvwv responds:

yep, intro is definitely what (and maybe only) what i like. and the guitar...yep, i agree with everything you said. thanks for the review!