Astrono's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jonathan's Song]

Wow!

Wow, beautiful
I get goose bumps from this song, it's starts like a normal song.
Than you make the melody a bit clearer, and then you add echo's what give it a really nice touch.
This could be used for a romantic movie or maybe for a beach.
Or the sea, this is so good and could be used for so much things!
I really like this song, make more please!:D

Soundshifter responds:

haha, im glad it made you imagine, thx for the review :)

[FL experiments 001]

Better but not that good

This one is better than your previous ones.
The main melody sounds good like a mysterious house, the beat doesn't really fit it.
You need softer instruments for it.
And maybe you could make the rhythm a bit less random.
You are a beginner in Fruity Loops and probably i could help you if you want.
You just have to PM me.

BlackPlastic responds:

Ya maybe some other time

[HrrHd - Suspense #1]

Good

The high tones have a normal melody,
the temple bells give it a kind of graveyard theme.
Probably a good theme for when someone is visiting a graveyard and something scary happens.
Try to improve on the length of the song and add more instruments ;)

horrorhead responds:

Alright thanks i shall keep that in mind =D. And i just made it as a sort of universal 'suspense" music so it could be integrated into any scary sorta scene. Thanks for reviewing =D.

[No mercy [full version]]

Okay

I 'am normal not a Heavy Metal listener but you have to try to review alot of different genres.
Hmm, it contains good melody's, good intro.
You used a good guitar for this song.
The drums at the backgrounds fit the song good,
the song gets faster later in the song.
It sounds good but you need to let more instruments come in later.
That's my tip for you, much luck with your next song ;)

Metalized responds:

yeah this one is a little diffrent from my other songs cause i decided to use only one guitar,if u know what i mean. But i prefer using two guitars. But then again it's fun to do something different :D Thx for the review man!!

[Nodal Primitivity - Part 2]

Really good!

Wow, i like this song.
It has some really nice melodys.
The intro is perfect, the bleeps that comes after it give it more feeling.
The melody sounds really good, but it repeats too much.
I like this song, but it needs some improvements.
It starts really good and gives a feeling like this is going to be a really good song, and it is but the melody repeats too much.
Add some other melody's, that's all.
Keep up the good work!
I liked it!

surfertmex responds:

Thanks for the review - I appreciate it - To clarify though, I deliberately made the piece repetitive to experiment with some minimalistic techniques (Check out the wiki entry for it if you don' know what it is)

[TT - Temple of Time]

Hmm

Ok, the intro has only one instrument while you could use some more instruments.
The song itself is better, but it isn't perfect.
The beat is good, but for the melodys you need some softer instruments.
Maybe you could use some electric guitars that are softer than those for the melodys.

AngryFaic responds:

Well thanks for the 6. I'm improving as I go, so keep an eye out.

[Avatar Theme [Remix AC vs. LL]]

Perfect

This is my favourite song!
You have used some of the original instruments they used for the intro from the show.
It's wonderful, i could listen to it for hours.
I 'am a big Avatar fan so that could it be too, perfect i don't know what you have to improve on.
The bleep tones are perfect, the electric guitars....
Sometimes i get goose bumps from this song.
Maybe, add some more cool effects if you want to make a new one but you don't have to because this one sounds perfect!
Keep it up ;)

LaymanLove responds:

To be honest, I've never seen Avatar, but my friend was playing the videogame and I couldnt help but notice how kickass the music was...Thanks for the review Astro!

[6:56 (double redo)]

Nice

The guitars at the beginning give a nice intro, when the main guitar comes it gives a nice melody.
And nice vibrating effect with the main guitar at the end.
The drums at the background are good, but i think they are too soft so you can't really concentrate on them, while they sound good.
Good work, keep it up.

yoyobro69 responds:

Thanks Alot! Really, I just whipped that together in like, 14 minutes.

[-A- Madness -A- Demo..]

Need improvements

Negative things
Ehm, i listened to it and i think that you repeat the same melody too much.
The synth that came later, made it a bit better but it keeps playing the same melody.
Adding some other melodys would improve it alot.

Positive things
Nice beat, and the kind of instruments you used were nice.
The bang sound at the end was nice.

Little-Ace responds:

Thx man i need a bit a negative shit to and this is jsut the demo man ... my 11th hip-hop and i jsut got full verson of fl so ill be mixin mad aha.