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Really good song,
the piano and guitar fitted eachother really good.
It was a perfect short loop for a beach scene in a movie.
The water effect at the end was good too.
I see you are getting better at making loops, keep practicing in making them.
Only tip is that it would be good to try to make a song one time too. ;)
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It contained one instrument, if i 'm right the temple bell?
And it had one note in most seconds and sometimes it contained two notes that didn't fit eachother.
My tip is that you practice a bit more at making music, add a good rhythm next time and try to add alot of more instruments that still fit eachother.
I know, i know. It's hard to do, but if you practice alot it must be possible.
Succes with your next songs, hope they get better ;)
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The melody was good, and the kick was at a good rhythm.
But that was all, i think this is a bit too short even for a loop.
Make it longer next time, and maybe add some more instruments ;)
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The noise at the beginning is a bit irritating, the hi-hats are going on too long.
But they give a good song, only thing is you have to make them shorter.
The Wooooh sound sounds good.
The bleep sound was good, but you made that one too short.
You have to add a melody to it and make it longer.
It sounds good, for a beat but if you want to make a song out of it you have to add melody's ;)
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Ok, it sounds a bit weird.
Like a monster is coming, in disco style.
Later with the strings it is getting better.
When the kicks come it has some more action in it.
You are right, it could be used for a disco, but it's with thanks to the melody good for a monster theme too ;)
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Wow, i like this song.
It has some really nice melodys.
The intro is perfect, the bleeps that comes after it give it more feeling.
The melody sounds really good, but it repeats too much.
I like this song, but it needs some improvements.
It starts really good and gives a feeling like this is going to be a really good song, and it is but the melody repeats too much.
Add some other melody's, that's all.
Keep up the good work!
I liked it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review - I appreciate it - To clarify though, I deliberately made the piece repetitive to experiment with some minimalistic techniques (Check out the wiki entry for it if you don' know what it is)
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Ok, the intro has only one instrument while you could use some more instruments.
The song itself is better, but it isn't perfect.
The beat is good, but for the melodys you need some softer instruments.
Maybe you could use some electric guitars that are softer than those for the melodys.
Author's Response:
Well thanks for the 6. I'm improving as I go, so keep an eye out.
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This is my favourite song!
You have used some of the original instruments they used for the intro from the show.
It's wonderful, i could listen to it for hours.
I 'am a big Avatar fan so that could it be too, perfect i don't know what you have to improve on.
The bleep tones are perfect, the electric guitars....
Sometimes i get goose bumps from this song.
Maybe, add some more cool effects if you want to make a new one but you don't have to because this one sounds perfect!
Keep it up ;)
Author's Response:
To be honest, I've never seen Avatar, but my friend was playing the videogame and I couldnt help but notice how kickass the music was...Thanks for the review Astro!
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The beat at the beginning sounds good, the space sound that comes later make it sound better.
The bleep sounds give it a very good melody.
Only thing is that some melodys repeat too much, make them a bit different and than it sounds better.;)
Author's Response:
Thank you. A perfect review!
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The guitars at the beginning give a nice intro, when the main guitar comes it gives a nice melody.
And nice vibrating effect with the main guitar at the end.
The drums at the background are good, but i think they are too soft so you can't really concentrate on them, while they sound good.
Good work, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks Alot! Really, I just whipped that together in like, 14 minutes.
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