Astrono's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[OX~ Above the Clouds]

Good but still work on the rhythms

Look, now it gets better!
The voice at the intro was the best thing for this, i guess you tried to make a song for an airplane because if this was a, look at the sky song the voice wouldn't really fit it.
I really like the synths you put in this, and the voice is pretty good too.
The drumloop is good too and fits this song, i like the bleep sounds.
Good work, but i say again, try to work on the rhythms.

On-yX responds:

Thanks :) I've been waiting for a review on this song.

[OX - Tech Loop]

Good melody's, other things need a lot of work

This gets a bit boring, since you repeat the same melody too much.
Although it's a loop you can at least try to use two or three different melody's which sound good with eachother, and i hear pre-sets in this one again.
Good thing is the melody again, i really like the melody's you mixed through eachother in this one, but still, instruments.
Drums are good.

On-yX responds:

I thought it sounded amazing at the time, and I was oblivious to the fact its too short. I didn't know I could create my own sounds, and I could use the pattern thing.

[Ambience of Sound]

Hmm

Hmm, i don't really like the fact you used pre-sets for this.
But if this is your first little song i can understand it.
The first thing repeats too much, then the voice comes in.
And then the synth, which plays some melody's in too different rhythms, you have some good melody's in mind but in this song, (i still have to listen to your others) you have too much problems with making the good rhythms.
Needs work, but i heard worse things.

On-yX responds:

Remember, I wasn't exactly a pro.

[-=LJC=- Peripheral Observation]

I love this piece

This song is really creepy and strange but beautiful too.
I really love those robot sounds in this song, and the other mechanic sounds.
With the main instrument, which gives a kind of feeling like you are somewhere else, and the beat adds more strangeness to this song.
A brilliant piece, keep it up and make more like this.

LJCoffee responds:

Thanks - seems that a few peeps are using words like "creepy and strange" I'm glad that you liked this one.

[[MS] - Blue Oiled Potatoes]

A good space feeling

The intro started really calming.
With a good beat through it, and some nice background sounds, the water sounds were a good thing that you added to this song.
It keeps on like this for a long time, the relaxing and calming part.
And then after a while the pad comes in, which plays some great melody's which i love!
Indeed, it reminds me of space, the mysterious feeling.
As others said, this sounds much better than your other songs.
Try to make more songs with this NASA space expeditions feeling.

MackerelSalad responds:

thank you good sir

[Forgive me Newgrounds!]

Good work

I like those metal instruments you use at the intro and the melody's are ok too.
Enough variation in this song, the rhythm isn't bad either and the drums are good too.
Nice little song you have here, i like it :)
If i should say something you have to improve on.. try to make it longer next time is the only thing i can come up with and keep on doing like this.

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

thanks for the constructive review!
ill never touch this song again lol its just a melody I liked so I put it on here, check out Gateway!!! its a lot better than this and I made it like yesterday.

[Logan Rutlage]

Glitchy

This is a really cool song!
And calming too in some way....

The bells give a kind of mysterious effect to this song and the beat gives a good rhythm and addition to this song.
And the bass gives the dark and creepy mood to this song.

Good work, keep it coming.

[[GF]If-I-Could-Be-You[GF]]

Nice

A nice intro you got there and indeed a happy song.

Good melody's you used for this song, the part with the short notes was really interesting.
I liked it and i had to think of a kind of stadium when i heard it, this could be a perfect song to play at party's.
Only thing you could better add next time is a bassline.

Nice work, keep the songs coming.

GroundForce responds:

what's wrong with the bassline? has it to low high frequ? cuz if you have a sub, you will notice it ^^

[GF]

[Return of Fire]

Good

A great song!
You are so good.

The beats already gave this song a pretty nice RPG battle like effect.
However i don't know the game Lightening Force.

I really like those bells and melody's you used for this song.

Keep going on like this.

Charem responds:

Thanks! I never really thought of it as an RPG battle song, but I agree! =3

[Drowning...]

Wow

I loved the reverse sounds you used.
I always love reversed sounds XD
Anyway, as the other person said this doesn't really sound like drowning indeed.
When you drown, it sounds faster, maybe creepy-er.
People are shocked when they drown, so you could add some shocking effects too if you would like to make a good drowning song.

And maybe some low hits, but played at a low volume so it sounds like death is coming closer but still is far away or like you are leaving earth.
Going to another place.

This sounds more like a dreamworld, i have no idea why but reversed instruments can really give a dream effect to songs.
Anyway, the orchestrals were i great addition to the song!

Keep making these songs! :D

Charem responds:

I agree that you'd be frenzied at first when drowning, but it'd still be pretty quiet, muffled, soundless. Just the sound of the water rushing about you as you flail about. No scream will be heard. I guess that's what I was trying to emulate.

Though the idea of it being a dreamworld is also quite good! =3