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Nice work.

I like the intro, and the instruments you used are nice and soft.
The claps were good too but could have some more effects like a reverb.

I like the twinkle sound you used in it, the arpeggiator was nice too but you could replace that with another instrument too.

The melody's were done pretty good, nice work but try to use samples next time and not Fruity Loops Pre-Sets.

Nice song

Nice piano at the intro, the main melody is pretty good.
I really like those square tones you used, the beat isn't really good.
They are a bit too simple, you are really good at melody's and different rhythms.
Only thing you have to work on is using other instruments for the beats next time ;)

Pretty good!

The foot steps at the intro are a good way to come in the song.
The main melody that comes after it sounds really good, the foot steps that you hear stepping in different rhythms are good.
When the beat comes in, it fits with the rhythm of the foot steps.

The arpeggio has a simple but effective melody that fits the other things the song include.
The bass-like tone that comes before the ending part is a good thing to include too, and a good and nice ending with the glitchy sounds.

I don't know what you can improve because you already added almost everything that's needed in a song, maybe try to add some more variety to the main melody the next time.

Good job! ;)

MackerelSalad responds:

I tried to make this song more of a minimalist when it comes to melody, thanks for your review, man!

Nice song.

I like the electric piano and the voices at the intro, after that a nice melody and beat come in with ice cube sounds.
The song keeps on with the same instruments, but you add some variety in the beats and melody's sometimes.
And at the part before the ending ending you can hear the same ice cube-like sounds at the beginning again.
I like the beat you used at the ending, it fits that part really good.
Good fading out effect at the end.
A good worked out song, keep it up.

MackerelSalad responds:

The icecube like sounds, you are talking about is actually a ride I altered.
Thanks for the review, man!

Very good work

Hmm, yes i can hear in this why you named it Big Boss.
I like the organs at the intro, and the beats and hits make it a really nice Drum 'n' Bass song.
I like the main melody's with short notes.
Only thing you can improve on is trying to use more instruments the next time.
Good work, keep it up! ;)

Amazing work!

I like the intro, i like the tinkling sounds and the Trance sounds in the song.
Nice voice that you added to it too.
I can't come up with anything you can improve at it, this is a perfect song.
Keep it up! ;)

A bit repetitive, but nice melody's

I like the song, has the same melody's like the original song.
Nice instruments, but is too repetitive.
Try to work on that, good luck with your further songs ;)

GroundForce responds:

k i will!!

thx!

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Heres a review, sir

Wow, sounds really nice!
I like the orchestrals, and it sounds really fantasy when i hear the star sound.
Nice beat, and the guitar is the best part.
I like the synths, you added later after the guitar.
Good work, keep it up

wolf-tech responds:

thanx. i proabally made some mistakes in there. after all i've been working on it from 1 am to 4am.

Work on the intro

I like the intro, but it repeats too much.
When the intro has ended you get some nice synths, i really like them.
They sound a bit dreamy, and have some different melody's.
Nice song, but try to play the intro a bit less times next time ;)

Sounds a bit Egyptic to me

I can really hear a Drum 'n' Bass song in this, i like the main melody's you add after the intro.
Hmm, the melody sounds a bit egyptic to me.
The beats give agressivity to the song, but i like the main instrument you added after the intro the most.
Try to make it a bit less repetitive the next time, nice work.

DJ-Izeales responds:

thnx for the review mate, i kno, i need to keep surpising the listener, this is the first time i had a go and breakbeat/drum and bass beat. keep reviews coming

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