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[TT - Temple of Time]

Hmm

Ok, the intro has only one instrument while you could use some more instruments.
The song itself is better, but it isn't perfect.
The beat is good, but for the melodys you need some softer instruments.
Maybe you could use some electric guitars that are softer than those for the melodys.

AngryFaic responds:

Well thanks for the 6. I'm improving as I go, so keep an eye out.

[Avatar Theme [Remix AC vs. LL]]

Perfect

This is my favourite song!
You have used some of the original instruments they used for the intro from the show.
It's wonderful, i could listen to it for hours.
I 'am a big Avatar fan so that could it be too, perfect i don't know what you have to improve on.
The bleep tones are perfect, the electric guitars....
Sometimes i get goose bumps from this song.
Maybe, add some more cool effects if you want to make a new one but you don't have to because this one sounds perfect!
Keep it up ;)

LaymanLove responds:

To be honest, I've never seen Avatar, but my friend was playing the videogame and I couldnt help but notice how kickass the music was...Thanks for the review Astro!

[6:56 (double redo)]

Nice

The guitars at the beginning give a nice intro, when the main guitar comes it gives a nice melody.
And nice vibrating effect with the main guitar at the end.
The drums at the background are good, but i think they are too soft so you can't really concentrate on them, while they sound good.
Good work, keep it up.

yoyobro69 responds:

Thanks Alot! Really, I just whipped that together in like, 14 minutes.

[-A- Madness -A- Demo..]

Need improvements

Negative things
Ehm, i listened to it and i think that you repeat the same melody too much.
The synth that came later, made it a bit better but it keeps playing the same melody.
Adding some other melodys would improve it alot.

Positive things
Nice beat, and the kind of instruments you used were nice.
The bang sound at the end was nice.

Little-Ace responds:

Thx man i need a bit a negative shit to and this is jsut the demo man ... my 11th hip-hop and i jsut got full verson of fl so ill be mixin mad aha.

[~a new beggining~]

Wow

I love your music, it's like one of that good old medieval like videogames.
I especially love the flute, it gives a nice effect.
You have a good taste of instruments, it sounds really great!
And original too, keep up composing music like this!
I 'm looking forward to your next work ;)

quickshot-x responds:

i like rpg making systems, it's one of the best entertainment in iran, there's a reason why i wanted to learn english desperatly, and yes my next upcoming work will mostly be a fusion collab with aspachi. i learn and get my talent by other music and such.

[Freaky Dance Beat]

Freaky

You are right that it sounds freaky,
if the beat comes it begins to sound good.
The part that begins after the beat is too long i think.
It sounds good, but it could use some improvements like more dark instruments ;)

[^Relaxing song^]

Good

I Make relaxing songs myself too sometimes,
and the melody sounded good but you used way too less instruments.
I think you could better add more instruments next time, but keep going on.
If you continue with making music, you are going to be great. ;)
Please, listen to mine Audio Portal, there are a few good examples of relaxing music into it too :P

[The Wandering Soul]

Good Job

Very good done, it sounds dark but there are a few false notes in it.
If you fix that your song sounds perfect! ;)

woohoono1 responds:

Thankx man, always up for a tip, but I'm not exactly which instruments are hittin the false notes. Is it the last note on the second part of the piano riff.
Well good luck with ya music
*PEACE*