I love it
Wow, one of my favorite paper mario songs in a super good remix!
Good instruments, the bells perfectly fit it.
The main instrument for the main melody is good, only thing is that the square instrument didn't really fit but that doesn't matter.
Really good song!
Keep it up ;)
Wow!
Wow, beautiful
I get goose bumps from this song, it's starts like a normal song.
Than you make the melody a bit clearer, and then you add echo's what give it a really nice touch.
This could be used for a romantic movie or maybe for a beach.
Or the sea, this is so good and could be used for so much things!
I really like this song, make more please!:D
haha, im glad it made you imagine, thx for the review :)
Better but not that good
This one is better than your previous ones.
The main melody sounds good like a mysterious house, the beat doesn't really fit it.
You need softer instruments for it.
And maybe you could make the rhythm a bit less random.
You are a beginner in Fruity Loops and probably i could help you if you want.
You just have to PM me.
Ya maybe some other time
Perfect
The intro sounds good,
the melody gives a kind of agressive beat.
The fwoosh sound at the background gives a good effect.
If it starts with the beat it gets better, the new instrument make it sounds better.
Then the main melody starts again, and the new instrument starts again after a few repeats.
The fade in and fade out effect at the end make it sounds really good.
It should be a really good song for a Flash Game.
Maybe a shooter game.
A really good song, as i see it's used in some submissions.
The same melody repeats to much but it's putted in the song at a way that it still sounds really good.
I don't know what you could improve on but keep making on these kind of tracks ;)
Ok....
It sounded much like a videogame theme.
Maybe good for a nice old videogame titlescreen theme.
The strings make it sounds better, really good melody's.
They sound happy, like theres peace restored in a land.
Only thing i don't get is your title, You're fired.
It sounds too peaceful for a title like that, only thing that had to do with it was the title came in later.
The melody fits the title but the melody's are way to nice to fit it, and the voice at the end said you're fired.
Hmm, this song could be used if someone is astonished because he's fired and there plays a happy song after there repeats the line: You're fired in his head.
Things to improve on?
The melodys, they are good melody's but don't really fit the title.
Anyway it was good song in overall, much luck with your next one. ;)
Good
The high tones have a normal melody,
the temple bells give it a kind of graveyard theme.
Probably a good theme for when someone is visiting a graveyard and something scary happens.
Try to improve on the length of the song and add more instruments ;)
Alright thanks i shall keep that in mind =D. And i just made it as a sort of universal 'suspense" music so it could be integrated into any scary sorta scene. Thanks for reviewing =D.
Okay
I 'am normal not a Heavy Metal listener but you have to try to review alot of different genres.
Hmm, it contains good melody's, good intro.
You used a good guitar for this song.
The drums at the backgrounds fit the song good,
the song gets faster later in the song.
It sounds good but you need to let more instruments come in later.
That's my tip for you, much luck with your next song ;)
yeah this one is a little diffrent from my other songs cause i decided to use only one guitar,if u know what i mean. But i prefer using two guitars. But then again it's fun to do something different :D Thx for the review man!!
Good for a beat
The noise at the beginning is a bit irritating, the hi-hats are going on too long.
But they give a good song, only thing is you have to make them shorter.
The Wooooh sound sounds good.
The bleep sound was good, but you made that one too short.
You have to add a melody to it and make it longer.
It sounds good, for a beat but if you want to make a song out of it you have to add melody's ;)
Good
Ok, it sounds a bit weird.
Like a monster is coming, in disco style.
Later with the strings it is getting better.
When the kicks come it has some more action in it.
You are right, it could be used for a disco, but it's with thanks to the melody good for a monster theme too ;)
Really good!
Wow, i like this song.
It has some really nice melodys.
The intro is perfect, the bleeps that comes after it give it more feeling.
The melody sounds really good, but it repeats too much.
I like this song, but it needs some improvements.
It starts really good and gives a feeling like this is going to be a really good song, and it is but the melody repeats too much.
Add some other melody's, that's all.
Keep up the good work!
I liked it!
Thanks for the review - I appreciate it - To clarify though, I deliberately made the piece repetitive to experiment with some minimalistic techniques (Check out the wiki entry for it if you don' know what it is)
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