Astrono's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[watching the stars]

Good, but needs some work

The beat at the start, is a bit too loud i think.
I like the twinkle sounds.
But it gets a bit too repetitive.
I like the synth you add after it, and the falling star sound.
The orchestrals are really nice too.
Good song, but work a bit more on the variety in melody's the next time.
Changing some notes, some times can help with that.
Keep it up! ;)

DJ-doomslide responds:

thanks for the comment ill take it into consideration

[The Chukkbar]

Nicely done

Nice drum beat at the intro.
I love the melody's you added, i like the square tones you added later in the song.
A swinging song, the Trance instruments were a good addition to it.
Maybe try to add a bassline the next time.
Keep it up! ;)

Mr-Dark responds:

Thanks for your review!
I'll try to add a better bassline in my next remix (or own song) :)

[{Hollow Man} [NG Cut]]

Super

Like the synths at the intro.
The phasing effects are nice too, i like the organs that come after the intro and the strings give it a more dramatic effect.
I like the harp, it makes the song a bit more calming, the beats are nice too like most of times with your songs.
Like the "Cling" sound, nice work! ;)
Love it

[Pokemon Drum N' Bass]

Nice song

Nice echo effect you used for Ash at the intro.
I really like the Pokemon Game melody's, and you have worked them out really well.
Nice done, with the beat at the background while the melody's are playing.
Maybe you can improve on adding some more instruments on the melody's next time, rhythms are good done.
Like the Squirtle thing at the end :P
Keep it up.

[->>rpg Tk Battle2<<-]

Nice work

I like the intro, and the electric guitar gives it a more swinging effect.
I like the electric piano, it makes the song better.
Really swinging melody's, a nice rhythm and a nice clapping in the beat.
I don't know what you can improve at it, maybe try to add some more melody's one time but that isn't really needed since this song sounds good already.
Good work, keep it up. ;)

vwvSTATICvwv responds:

yep, intro is definitely what (and maybe only) what i like. and the guitar...yep, i agree with everything you said. thanks for the review!

[[Trancification X g-R]]

Nice work

Nice song, i like the melody's.
Good song to dance at XD
Keep it up

[|| Dark-walk ||]

Hmm

The electric guitar sounded good, but i think the bells didn't really fit it.
And they keep making the same melody over and over again.
A good melody for a creepy song but it repeats way too much.
If you want to get tips on how to add more variation to your songs you can PM me ;)

[The Empire in the Sky]

Good song

Actually this was a really good song, it sounds a bit castlevania-like.
Good melody's for a creepy castle, really nice how you add an agressive part later in the song.
Good music for a boss battle, well i don't know what i have to say of it further.
Good work, and i 'm looking forward to your other work.
I'll give you a 4/5 ;)

[*** THE RISE OF SATAN ***]

Good for a creepy song, but it only had the basics

Well, i listened to it.
And expected something more great, amazing.
But the only thing i heard in it were some drums, a main instruments that has one simple melody and a kind of bass.
Hmm, with this i only want to say you, your song could use alot of improvements.
For example, if you want to make this a really satanic song you could add backwards messages in it, you can use your own creativity to come up with evil messages backwards.
And as second thing, you could add a low-pitched voice that is making murmur.
And you could use a high variety of different kind of melody's, like adding strange sounding melody's.
I 'm not sure how to explain what i mean with that but you probably will understand.
Positive things were that the sounds you used, were sounding good for a creepy effect and it could be really good music for a scary movie.
I hope i helped you, good luck for your other songs in the future ;)